My Planet
I looked outside the window of the spaceship.
There’s sparkly stars and a big bright moon,
I was almost there! I was almost on a planet I created 2 years ago today!
The last time I visited the planet, I remember the light blue and the purple, and the shiny white ring around it.
The stars shined above me.
I couldn't believe I was almost home.
Nice job Eden keep up the good hard work
ReplyDelete•Hi Eden•
ReplyDeleteYour work Is Very Good And Nice
And Keep Up The Hard Work!
DeleteHello Eden,
ReplyDeleteI like your planet it sounds like a nice place. Your description is very visible in my mind. Does your planet have a name?
Hi Eden
ReplyDeleteI like the planet it sounds like a nice place and keep up the good work:)
hi Eden your planet sounds nice and cool I like how you start with I looked out my window.
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