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Thursday 28 May 2020

Eden Poem


Today we had to make a poem about our self
Whats your favourite thing to do?
Do you like making poems

5 comments:

  1. Hi Eden I really like your poem.By the way Eden is a really nice name

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  2. good and i like how that you trying

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  3. Hi Eden. LOved your poem and I really learnt more about you. :)

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  4. Hi Eden.
    I really like the way you explained yourself.
    Nice job.

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  5. good and i like how that you trying

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