Why I believe sports is better than music.
In my opinion I think both music and sports is good for our brains and health but, I do believe that sports is way better for our health, Brains and our body
Firstly, Sports are really good for our health.
It gives you a clear healthy mid set. Sports are also great for stress and depression.
Secondly, Sports is better than music because, sports are good for our body and our bones.
Sports keeps you fit and healthy. It's also great exercise for your muscles and it's generally good for your body to get exercise anyway.
Thirdly, Sports keeps your blood pumping and it keeps you healthy and energized.
Lastly, Sports is good for your brain.
Sports can make you happy or your brain happy. It's also good for our brain because it has a better chance of filtering out noise and static. Sports can help you get your mind off something.
These are just my opinions on why I think sports is better than music.
Obviously, other people have different opinions but, These are just mine.
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